2.3 Partner’s Feedback

  • Was there anything surprising or unexpected in how they described their experience of your piece?
  • One thing that surprised me when they described their experience of my piece was that they really liked the black background contrasting with the music rings to make the color look brighter and more colorful. 
  • What opportunities for improvement did they identify? Did they have any suggestions that you would like to incorporate in future versions of the piece?
  • One improvement that we all identify is adding a glowing effect to the ring stroke to make it look more like a neon light. Anna Tang helped me find a link to a P5 glow effect with codes for me to study and use. I will definitely try to figure out how to make this effect and implement it in my later work.
  • Were any parts of your code confusing to them, and could you improve its readability by choosing different variable/function names or adding comments?
  • I did not have any comments on my code, which could be a problem since I might not even know what I was writing without any comments. I should probably comment and organize my code while doing the assignment
  • Did they have any suggestions on ways to improve the code?
  • They did not give any suggestions on ways to improve the code, but I’ve received feedback from prof that I should try using HSB color mode to achieve the effect that I want.

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